The Book Doctor mentorship program offers tiered options to suit different needs and budgets, from quick synopsis feedback to long-term manuscript guidance.
1. Synopsis Diagnosis
Service: A short, intensive review of the client’s synopsis to ensure it is polished, engaging, and ready for agents or publishers.
- Turnaround Time: 3 days.
- Includes:
- A detailed critique (up to 1,000 words) focusing on structure, clarity, and marketability.
- Suggestions for improvement with actionable steps.
- One follow-up email for clarification/questions.
- Pricing: £150
“Working with Susan on my synopsis was an absolute game-changer. I had been struggling to distill my manuscript into a summary that would grab an agent’s attention, but Susan quickly identified the strengths and weaknesses in my draft. Her feedback was clear, constructive, and insightful, and the detailed critique gave me actionable steps to improve. Within days, I had a polished synopsis that actually reflected the heart of my story. Thanks to her help, I now feel confident submitting to agents. I can’t recommend the Synopsis Diagnosis service highly enough!”
2. Month-long Manuscript Treatment
Service: A comprehensive one-month engagement to refine a portion of the manuscript or focus on overall structure and tone. Ideal for writers in the middle stages of their manuscript.
- Duration: 4 weeks.
- Includes:
- Review of up to 20,000 words (with feedback on structure, pacing, character development, and style).
- Two 1-hour virtual consultations (kickoff and midway).
- Detailed editorial notes and recommendations.
- Email support for questions throughout the month.
- Pricing: £500
“The Month-long Manuscript Treatment was exactly what I needed to take my writing to the next level. Susan’s detailed feedback on my first 20,000 words was a perfect balance of constructive critique and encouragement, helping me refine my characters, tighten my pacing, and strengthen the overall flow of the story. The one-on-one consultations were invaluable—Susan really listened to my concerns and offered thoughtful suggestions tailored to my vision for the book. By the end of the month, I felt more confident in my direction and equipped with practical tools to keep moving forward. Susan’s expertise and personal approach made all the difference.”
3. Six-month Mentorship
Service: A tailored program for writers seeking sustained guidance from first drafts to polished manuscripts.
- Duration: 6 months.
- Includes:
- Review of up to 80,000 words over the six months (broken into 4 rounds).
- Monthly 1-hour virtual consultations.
- A personalized writing plan at the start of the mentorship.
- Feedback on query letters, synopses, or other submission materials.
- Priority email access for ongoing questions and advice.
- Final manuscript assessment with a “next steps” roadmap.
- Pricing: £2,500 (can be paid in installments)
“I’m four months into Book Doctor’s Six-month Mentorship, and it has already been a transformative experience for my writing. Susan’s guidance has helped me uncover layers of depth in my story that I didn’t realise were there. Her detailed feedback on each section has been incredibly insightful, helping me sharpen my characters, refine my plot, and improve my pacing. The monthly consultations feel like having a trusted partner in my writing journey. Susan strikes the perfect balance between encouraging me and challenging me to dig deeper. I’ve seen so much growth in my manuscript and in myself as a writer. I can’t wait to see where the final two months take me.”
Add-on Services
- Additional Words: £50 per 5,000 words (available for Month-long and Six-month packages).
- Rush Fee: £50 for expedited turnaround.
Benefits for You
- Affordable entry-level options (Synopsis Diagnosis) for new writers.
- Mid-tier and premium options (Month-long and Six-month) for serious writers ready to invest in their craft.
- Flexible, personalised feedback ensures the program meets your unique goals.
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